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122 Edie Road
Saratoga Springs, NY 12866
518.583.4177

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When building a precise message, don’t waffle. Just say it.

Not good: You may have heard about our bridge building.

Good: We build bridges.

Not good: Let us know if we can do anything for you.

Good: Need help?  Call us now.

Not good: Our company ranks among the ten best local widget layers.

Good: Many companies lay widgets in this area. You may not call us first, but you will hire us first.

Not good:  Our giant holiday sale begins tomorrow at 6 AM.

Good: Come buy great furniture on sale tomorrow beginning at 6 AM.

And one of our own personal favorites:

Not good: 100% Grated Parmesan Cheese

Good: Grated 100% Parmesan Cheese

 

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